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Entering the Workforce !! *Portfolio Critique Needed*

  • Hey Everyone !

    It's been awhile since I've had something new to post here, but I have been working on a new design for my online portfolio, as I am nearing the end of my last semester of design school here in Canada.

    Here is the link:

    http://www.maxwellariss.com/dev/index.html

    The link I'm posting is pretty much just the framework of how the website will look and feel. I know the code needs some attention in terms of validation but I will probably leave that until the end.

    I havn't been able to truly test it out in Ie yet so there is potentially some horrifying bugs there... Lets just hope I'll get lucky ;) And as always, any advice is welcome ! I'm still pretty new to all of this in the grand scheme of things and have a long road of learning ahead.

    Hope everyone's doing wonderful !

    - Max
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    Maxwell Ariss - Visual Thinker
    http://www.maxwellariss.com
  • Very nice, clean, portfolio-style layout, love the navigation and the slide-down gradient reveal in the content area :)
  • "sliver37" said:
    Very nice, clean, portfolio-style layout, love the navigation and the slide-down gradient reveal in the content area :)


    I was thinking the same thing!
  • Thanks guys :) I really appreciate it !
  • Overall the design is pretty good, I like it. However there are some tweaks that could be made, for example the contact form in the footer, when you enter text I find that is sticks out of the input box, and black on black perhaps isn't the best choice especially for readability. I would instead chose white, and reposition it so the text is in the box.

    I'm testing this in FF 3.6 on a Mac.
  • Your absolutely right, I'm glad someone caught that !

    Cheers !

    Do any of you have any thoughts on the logo in the footer ? I feel like its possibly too cramped, but at the same time there's something I like about it... decisions decisions !
  • I do like the design, but I find the size of everything and the font size altogether way too big.
    I cannot see the captions on your slider without having to scroll down :evil: Grrrr. Funnily enough I'm always complaining about unreadability and too small or not contrasted enough text. Your site almost feels like it's shouting at me.
  • Thanks for the input Virtual,

    Maybe the design does come off as large but its still scaled down from the sizing on my current portfolio ;) Which font size did you think was too big ? And the visibility of the captions will vary with scrolling depending on the screen size as I'm sure your well aware, I guess I was targeting screen resolutions on the larger end - it will still all fit on a 1024px screen but yea.

    As for the site shouting, Id prefer a shout to a whisper !!

    Thanks mate,

    - Max